Kathy, Thank you Kathy!
Here is her submission:
What the hell? Elena thought. After all I’ve done for him. I got his life together and he was happy. Then that bitch comes along and ruins it all. Holding back the tears, she made it to her car. The drive was long but as she drove, the more angry she became. How can I show him? What can be done? Elena stops at a local bar. “Scotch” she ordered at the bar. As she sipped, she spotted a young man across the room. He caught her eye and what the hell, she needed a new distraction.
“Elena” she said. And you are…”
“Jose” he said. Jose? Wait a second.
She saw him at Christian’s party. She saw him with that bitch. The
bitch who turned Christian against her. Ohhh this could be fun.
Elena now had a plan. Use Jose to get that bitch away from Christian.
“Can I buy you another?” she asked Jose as he downed another shot.
“Another for my new friend” she said to the bartender.
“Thanks” Jose said glumly, downing the shot as soon as it hit the bar.
“Troubles?” She asked, knowing very well what his troubles were.
“The girl I love is marrying some rich playboy.” Jose said as he drank another shot. “Oh what a shame. Such a handsome young man as yourself deserves better than that,” she whispered as she sat closer to him, touching his knee. “Let me show you.” She then placed a kiss on his lips.
He kissed her back, but stopped and said “I don’t know. We just met.”
“Trust me,” she whispered. “You’ll like it and I can show you things you’ve never seen. I promise.” In a hazy state, Jose took her hand and walked out of the bar.
The next morning, Jose awoke to find himself in a stark white room, handcuffed to a bed “Good morning my Sweet. Welcome to my playroom. You were quite fun last night.” She spoke very softly, leaning over him kissing his lips.
“What the hell is going on here? Why am I handcuffed?” He was still hazy and started to panic. What had he done the night before?
“Don’t worry,” she told him stearnly. “I just need you to help me.”
“With what? I don’t even know you.”
“You and I seem to have a mutual acquantance,” She said, walking across the room and sitting in a chair in the corner of the room. Jose looked at her confused as she continued. “Anastasia Steele.”
“Ana? This is about Ana?” He asked, still groggy and confused.
“Anastasia has something I want back and you, my darling, are going to help me get it back.” She was now beside him, sitting on the bed, kissing his neck and running her hands down his bare chest. Jose was confused but oddly turned on at the same time.
“What..would..that be?” He whispered back.
She sat up, took his face in her hands and said “Christian Grey!”
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